Sunday, April 19, 2015

Fun with Notes, Part 4

Greetings, earthlings. 

Today, after my very long absence from the blogosphere, I bring you another edition of Fun With Notes. Enjoy. Click here to read parts one, two, three, and the Sebastian Edition.

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Oh, this looks like foreshadowing for romance… Mwahahahaaa.

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Gah, again with the romantic foreshadowing. I’m so mean.

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I think I’m going to die from an angst overdose. “It’s so angsty I’m gonna die.” … I haven’t even seen Despicable Me. 
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This is the ONE and ONLY time we are allowed to use this simile. 

[For those of you curious, the simile this comment referred to was "he looked like he'd been slapped with a fish." In the last draft, I used it like four times. I know. I know.] 

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Um, yeah, you could say that. He FREAKING DIED. 

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Yes, tremble in fear as you realize there is now someone ELSE in your way. MWAHAHA!

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OH. YOU. SLIMY UGH. ;AL;KSJLDF EVIL BLACKGAURD GRRR YOU DESERVE PRISON.  YOU KNOW WHERE SHE IS GAH I HATE YOU RIGHT NOW.

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YOU ;A;KLSDJKL;SDF GAAAAH!

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DUDES. I’M ACTUALLY CRYING. 
… Because of stuff I know that isn’t in this draft, but whatever.

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Descriptive, Lily. Real descriptive.

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This detail? Good. This prose? Bad. Fixy wixy.

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And that concludes this episode of Fun with Notes. Tune in next week for a, like, real post with like, (hopefully) useful hypotheses. Kirk out.